From: alex-ml@posteo.de
To: 9front@9front.org
Subject: Re: [9front] Minor Deviations in Section 4.3.11+ of the FQA?
Date: Wed, 17 Apr 2024 11:32:54 +0000 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <54a65182e70b25dbaf6352b6884570aa@posteo.de> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <0153B4493FF103FD84D346BB2594B481@wopr.sciops.net>
Hi qwx,
thank you very much! Below is my patch suggestion.
Best regards,
Alex
diff 4f79ee9b7787e6dea4ea94fab7b38ee50727f214 uncommitted
--- a/fqa4.ms
+++ b/fqa4.ms
@@ -804,7 +804,7 @@
/dev/sdC0/plan9
empty 0 62910477 (62910477 sectors, 29.99 GB)
-Plan 9 partition to subdivide (/dev/sdC0/plan9)[/dev/sdC0/plan9]:
+Plan 9 partition to subdivide (/dev/sdC0/plan9)[no default]:
.P2
Use the Plan 9 partition created in the previous step. Hit
@@ -920,22 +920,22 @@
.ihtml h3
.P1
You can connect to the internet via
-a local ethernet or a dial-up PPP connection.
+a local ethernet connection.
-Interface to use (ether, ppp)[ether]:
+We will configure the ethernet.
Please choose a method for configuring your ethernet connection.
manual - specify IP address, network mask, gateway IP address
- dhcp - use DHCP to automatically configure
+ automatic - use DHCP and SLAAC to automatically configure
-Configuration method (manual, dhcp)[dhcp]:
+Configuration method (manual, automatic)[automatic]:
.P2
.html - <a name="4.3.11.1" />
.ihtml h4 <h4>
.SH
-4.3.11.1 - dhcp
+4.3.11.1 - automatic
.R
.ihtml h4
@@ -954,7 +954,7 @@
.CW manual ,
enter values that are appropriate for your network.
.P1
-Configuration method (manual, dhcp)[dhcp]: manual
+Configuration method (manual, automatic)[automatic]: manual
ip address [no default]: 10.0.2.15
network mask [no default]: 255.255.255.0
gateway address [no default]: 10.0.2.2
@@ -980,7 +980,7 @@
/dev/sdD0/data (iso9660 cdrom)
-Distribution disk (/dev/sdD0/data, /dev/sdC0/fscache, /)[/]:
+Distribution disk (/dev/sdD0/data, /dev/sdC0/fscache, /)[no default]:
.P2
The CD-ROM is already mounted at
@@ -1055,7 +1055,7 @@
.html - <a name="4.3.14" />
.ihtml h3 <h3>
.SH
-4.3.14 - sysname
+4.3.14 - ndbsetup
.R
.ihtml h3
.P1
@@ -1141,8 +1141,8 @@
Since we are not installing on a disk with a pre-existing Windows
installation, we choose to install the Plan 9 master boot record and
mark the partition active:
.P1
-Install the Plan 9 master boot record (y, n)[no default]: y
-Mark the Plan 9 partition active (y, n)[no default]: y
+Install the Plan 9 master boot record (yes, no)[no default]: yes
+Mark the Plan 9 partition active (yes, no)[no default]: yes
The Plan 9 partition is now marked as active.
.P2
Am 17.04.2024 10:34 schrieb qwx@sciops.net:
> On Wed Apr 17 08:18:27 +0200 2024, alex-ml@posteo.de wrote:
>> Hello,
>>
>> I have noticed minimal differences in the wording of the installer and
>> the FQA in section 4.3.11 and following. Is this because I am using a
>> nigthly build, or could I send a patch for the FQA?
>>
>> Thank you and best regards,
>> Alex
>
> Hi,
>
> It's possible that the scripts have been updated without taking the
> fqa into account. You're welcome to send a patch for this or any
> other discrepancies you've noticed. Thanks!
>
> Cheers,
> qwx
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2024-04-17 11:39 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2024-04-17 6:17 alex-ml
2024-04-17 8:34 ` qwx
2024-04-17 11:32 ` alex-ml [this message]
2024-04-17 18:21 ` qwx
2024-04-18 2:10 ` sl
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